Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Junior Developer)

FlowerWind
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Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Junior Developer)

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Здравствуйте! :) Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, моё резюме (сейчас я живу и работаю в России, ищу отсюда работу):

Elena Ivanova
E-mail: xxxxxxxxxx@gmail.com
Skype: xxxxxxxxxx
Phone number: +1 650-xxx-xxxx
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Jr. Software developer
TECHNICAL SKILLS:
Experience developing with Java, C# (2 years)
Experience developing with Android, Java (1 year)
Experience with client side technologies such as JavaScript, JQuery, HTML and CSS
Knowledge of SQL, XML
Java Servlet/Java Server Pages
Understanding of MVC design pattern
Database: Oracle 10g
Application Server: Tomcat

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:
May 2014 – present
Android developer, Eva Studio, Chelyabinsk, Russia
Develop mobile chat like Viber for Android

March 2014 – April 2014
Software developer, Innocard, Chelyabinsk, Russia
С# .NET, Visual Studio, development with WCF
Design and development iOS applications (Cocoa UI/Cocos2d/XCode/Xamarin)

September 2013 - November 2013
Internship at Heidelberg University (Germany)

EDUCATION:
2014 – Master's Degree in Computer Science, South Ural State University, Chelyabinsk, Russia.
2012 – Security IT, South Ural State University, Chelyabinsk, Russia.

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Re: Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Junior Developer)

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Я вообще то ботаник - наверно более опытные люди могут посоветовать на более профессиональном уровне, но мне нравятся резюме в форме

Project
Responsibilities:
Environment:

на одном рабочем месте вы может быть участвовали в нескольких проектах -
напишите, что нибудь типа

http://www.indeed.com/r/Raavan-Kumar/9d00ca7c17691312

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Jr. Java/J2EE Developer
United Health Care - Dallas, TX
February 2007 to July 2008


Project: Customer Insurance Management
This system provides Patient Administration, Billing and Pharmacy Management functions for the hospital. The major functions of Patient Administration module included Allocating Registrations, Recording Personal Details, Handling Hospital Admissions, Assigning Insurance Details, and Recording Transfers within the hospital and Creation of Discharge Summary. The Billing module allowed Billing and receivables, looked into multiple modes of Payment and Rates Definition for Services. Pharmacy module included Consumables management, Maintenance of Drug Composition, Batch-wise Stock of Drugs, and Drug Categorization for Reporting.

Responsibilities:
• Involved in the analysis, design and implementation and testing phases of SDLC
• Developed Use Case Diagrams, Object Diagrams & Class Diagrams in UML
• Developed user interfaces using JSPs and CSS
• Performed client side validations using JavaScript
• Implemented the application using Struts framework that uses MVC design pattern


Environment: Java EE 1.4, IBM RAD 6.0, IBM WAS 6.0, Struts 1.2, Tiles,
Spring 1.2, Servlets 2.4, JSP, EJB, JDBC, JNDI, HTML, XML, DHTML, XSL


Project: Centralized Account Processing System (CAPS)
Prosperity Bank offers several personal and business solutions like Credit Cards, Auto Loans and Home Mortgages etc. The purpose of CAPS application is to bring down delinquency rate in Prosperity Bank credit cards. CAPS provided an interface to keep a track of user records and even their history. It also deals with tracking and research of a particular fraud check. The system deals with the 'Positive Pay' and 'Reverse Positive Pay' methodology of fraud check. It also deals with re-imbursement of money due to fraud checks by tracing the details in a fraud case.

Responsibilities:
• Understanding the exact requirements of the system
• Involved in complete life cycle of software development including designing, developing, testing, and deployment of application
• Created user screens using HTML, DHTML, JavaScript, JQuery, CSS and JSP as per user demands
• Developed using J2EE Architecture in Spring Framework by implementing MVC model
• Used BlazeDS for remote calls to Spring Framework from front-end in Flex


Environment: JDK1.5, Adobe Flex Builder 3.0, Action Script 3.0, MXML,
Java, JSP, Servlets, Spring 2.5, Hibernate 3.1, Microsoft SQL Server 2005,
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я первую работу нашла только после того, как рекрутша индуска переписала мое резюме в этом формате
Я знаю, как надо. Но сделаю, как хочу.
FlowerWind
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Re: Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Junior Developer)

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Большое спасибо! :)
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Re: Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, резюме (Junior Developer)

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FlowerWind wrote:Здравствуйте! :) Покритикуйте, пожалуйста, моё резюме (сейчас я живу и работаю в России, ищу отсюда работу):

Visa Status: US Green Card Holder
Маловероятно, что до приезда что-то таким образом найдёте. Только что пытаться общаться с теми же работодателями, что везут по H1B визе, могут, конечно, заинтересоваться, раз с вами проще в смысле визы, правда, опыта маловато... Остальные так редко заморачиваются.


"Experience developing with", не пишите так, это даже не понятно, с какого языка калька.

Уж лучше под Technical Skills определите просто группы по принадлежности:

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Platforms:                    Windows, Linux, Android
Programming languages:        Java, C#
Databases:                    ....
Web/client:                   ....
Web/server:                   ....
Или посмотрите образцы по контексту Software Engineer Resume.
... and even then it's rare that you'll be going there...

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