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MMMM NNNN
XXXX NW XXX TERRACE • Coral Springs, FL • XXXXX • CELL (XXX) XXX-XXXX • E-MAIL xxxxxxxxxxxx@gmail.com

SUMMARY
Object Oriented Developer with strong PHP and C# background
Expert in legacy application migration between MS and Linux platform
Over 13 years of WEB development experience
Fluent in Linux, Windows operating environments
Strong back end developer with wide skill set
Strong skills in MSSQL and MySQL database design and implementation

SKILLS
Professional:
Web Development / Programming, Web Systems Administration (Apache, Linux, MySQL, PHP, Subversion), Database Design and Query Optimization.
Technologies:
PHP 5, MySQL, MSSQL, JavaScript/jQuery, XML/XSD/XSLT, XHTML/HTML 4/5, CSS, Smarty 2/3, Subversion, MVC, CentOS, RedHat, Ubuntu, Microsoft Windows (8/7/Vista/XP/98), Windows Server (NT-2008).
Familiar with many other web technologies (Bootstrap 2/3, Node.js, Json, ASP.NET, MVC2, MVC3, ADO.NET, AJAX, GIS, GOOGLE DATA/MAP API, DB4O etc.)
Applications:
MS Visual Studio 6-2012, IIS6-7, Apache2, Mapnik, Texis, Movable Type 4/5/6, Bricolage 2, Atlasian Jira, Wiki, Memcache, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Access, Microsoft PowerPoint, Microsoft Outlook.

EXPERIENCE
Sep 2008 – Present: XXXXXX, Inc., Fort Lauderdale, FL.
Software Developer. Applied a wide range of technical skills, knowledge and experience to the projects of company’s clients as well as to the in-house intra-network applications. Responsibilities include: web application design, back-end development, using open source toolset (PHP, Memcache, Smarty, PostgreSQL, MySQL, Apache, Linux, Bricolage, Subversion, Google Data/Map API, Movable Type and others), front-end development (CSS, XML/XSD/XSLT, XHTML/HTML 4/5, Smarty 2/3, Bootstrap, JavaScript/ jQuery, JSON, AJAX) as well as Thunderstorm Texis search engine scripting.
Responsibilities:
- Designed and implemented database structure for different web applications
- Developed middleware modules and subsystems
- Integrated with Google Maps
- Reengineered legacy web application
- Migrated customer data from legacy web application
- Integrated with Mapnik (tile generation) subsystem
- Integrated with Google search API
- Integrated with Thunderstorm Texis search server
- Designed and implemented RESTful API
- Developed data import web application
- Integrated with Bricolage CMS and existing Webadmin application
- Developed application Web UI
- Developed and improved corporate level applications:
- Events Calendar
- Sponsored search
- Free access url generator
- Paywall system
- Featured events
- State info
- Participated in several global site redesigns

Nov 2001 – Sep 2008: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software Developer / Lead Software Developer. Initially served as part of the team and later as a team lead developer on one of the company's flagship B2C system “ZZZ” (MS Windows Vista/XP/98, MS Windows Server NT-2000, MSSQL, ASP.NET, C#, CSS, XML/XSD/XSLT, XHTML/HTML, JavaScript, AJAX). Developed “Company claim support subsystem” which was used for claim management. Served in average of 200-250 claims a day with a peak of 2000+ claims. Developed “Social security data exchange subsystem” that was widely used for social security data exchange with more than 25 data providers in 4 different data formats. Served around 6.5 million accounts in total. Developed “Customer accounting subsystem” which was Installed in 20+ “YYYYY” branches and served more than 15 million accounts in total. Developed “Legacy data import subsystem” that was widely used during legacy data import phase of the “Customer accounting” deployment process. During this phase was imported from 10 to 20+ years history of billing, payments and account details information about almost 15 million accounts.
Responsibilities:
- Developed client/server application and Web frontend
- Designed and implemented parts of database structure
- Developed 4 middleware modules and subsystems
- Migrated customer data from a range of different legacy applications
- Designed and implemented Business Logic Layer for some subsystems
- Designed and implemented Data Access Layer
- Involved into the full-life cycle development
- Organized customer support for some subsystems
- Organized release management for some subsystems
- Worked as a leader of a small (3-6) people team
- Solved performance issues

Aug 1997 – Nov 2000: XXX State Academy of XXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software developer. Developed software allows analyzing robust stability of self-controlling systems by using model’s interval polynomial zero areas.
Responsibilities:
- Designed and implemented data storage environment
- Developed UI, Storage, Calculation modules and subsystems

Dec 1995 – Aug 1996: XXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed workflows automation software for HR, Sales and Inventory departments.
Responsibilities:
- Implemented “Report” and “Printing” subsystems
- Designed and implemented part of the data storage environment

Feb 1994 – Dec 1995: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed “customer accounting system” and “prepaid card management system” software. Decreased monthly report generation time from 18 hours to 30 minutes. Implemented software allows company to be a first in region who presents new product for customers.
Responsibilities:
- Designed and implemented part of the data storage subsystem
- Implemented part of a new customer accounting system
- Integrated software with existing reporting subsystem

PERSONAL
2008 - 2014: Different personal project
- Game: Emperium (PHP, MySQL, XML, jQuery, AJAX, Bootstrap3, Restful API)
- Home automation (PHP, MySQL, XML, jQuery, AJAX, Bootstrap2, Node.js, Restful API)
- Home Buyer Assistant (C#, ASP.NET MVC3, Multithreading, HTML, XML/XSLT/XPATH)
- Best school apartment rent searcher (C#, Multithreading, KML, XML/XSLT/XPATH)
- Envelope master (C#, DB4O)
- Game: Be A Rich Man (C#, XML)
- Book reader with online dictionary integration (C#, HTML)
- Dictionary driller (C# )

EDUCATION
PhD in CS, XXX State Academy of XXX, Russia, Graduated 2000
Master in CS, Rostov State University, Russia, Graduated 1997

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Народ! Ну шо ж такое все смотрим и никто ничо не пишем? Нешто все так отстойно что слов нет???
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Убрал бы ПХД не нужный. Вся экспириенс в Раше нужно? 7 лет во Флориде хватит, кого интересует прошлое "столетие"? Убрал бы всё до этого, из убранно если есть key-вордз добавил бы к Флориде. Перенёс бы всё из пэст тенс в презент тенс, так как 2008-Презент. :D
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Я бы еще и Personal Projects убрал. Российский опыт можно и оставить, но может убрать первые два места. Думаю они ничего не добавляют.
В последнем месте работы намешаны responsibilities и projects.

Off Topic: Ростовский мехмат в 97? А какая кафедра? Или CS это не мехмат?
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Kycb-Kycb wrote:Я бы еще и Personal Projects убрал. Российский опыт можно и оставить, но может убрать первые два места. Думаю они ничего не добавляют.
В последнем месте работы намешаны responsibilities и projects.

Off Topic: Ростовский мехмат в 97? А какая кафедра? Или CS это не мехмат?
ПМиП :)
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IMHO ооочень длинно - я бы все жестоко сократил, чтобы занимало 1-2 страницы и ясно читались: основной скиллсет (без всяких Atlassian Jira и Microsoft Outlook - что за детский сад?) и позиция, на которую претендуете (frontend web? backend? ms word? :mrgreen: )- а то у Вас там все от MS Office до memcached понапихано, со всеми остановками.

Длинные и нудные перечисления Responsibilities тоже урезать как минимум на 2/3, а еще лучше - обобщить, а то lead developer, который указывает в резюме свой каждый чих за последние 13 лет выглядит подозрительно.
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Много повторяющихся слов "Integrated", "Developed". Я бы написал через запятую: Developed Foo, Bar and Bah. Опыт старше 5 лет писать очень коротко, в одно предложение: должность и круг обязанностей. У СВ нет Objective (типа че хочется делать).
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Итак Версия 2:

MMMM NNNN
XXXX NW XXX TERRACE • Coral Springs, FL • XXXXX • CELL (XXX) XXX-XXXX • E-MAIL xxxxxxxxxxxx@gmail.com

OBJECTIVE
To obtain a challenging and rewarding back-end web developer position where I can utilize my knowledge, proficiency, and skills to contribute to a company's growth and enhance expertise in web development and application design.

SUMMARY
Object Oriented Developer with strong PHP and C# background
Expert in legacy data/application migration between MS and Linux platforms
Over 13 years of WEB development experience
Over 20 years of total development experience
Fluent in Linux, Windows operating environments
Strong back end developer with wide skill set
Strong skills in MSSQL and MySQL database design and implementation

SKILLS
Professional: Web Development / Programming, Database Design and Query Optimization.
Technologies: PHP 5, MySQL, MSSQL, SVN, JavaScript/jQuery, XML/XSD/XSLT, XHTML/HTML 4/5, CSS, Smarty 2/3, Subversion, MVC, Linux, Windows NT-2008. Familiar with many other web technologies (Bootstrap 2/3, Node.js, Json, ASP.NET, MVC2, MVC3, ADO.NET, AJAX, GIS, GOOGLE DATA/MAP API, Microsoft Office API, DB4O etc.)
Applications: MS Visual Studio 6-2012, IIS6-7, Apache2, Mapnik, Texis, Movable Type 4/5/6, Bricolage.

EXPERIENCE
Sep 2008 – Present: XXXXXX, Inc., Fort Lauderdale, FL.
Software Developer. Applied a wide range of technical skills, knowledge and experience to the projects of company’s clients as well as to the in-house intra-network applications. Responsibilities include: web application design, back-end development, using open source toolset (PHP, MySQL, PostgreSQL, Apache2, Linux, Bricolage, SVN, Smarty, Texis, Movable Type and others), front-end development (HTML 4/5, JavaScript/ jQuery, AJAX, Bootstrap, CSS, XML, Google Data/Map API).
Responsibilities:
- Reengineering legacy web applications and migration customer data
- Designing and implementation data structures, data access layer
- Designing and implementation middleware and backend modules and subsystems
- Designing and implementation UI for web applications
- Integration with 3rd party applications(Mapnik, Google data API, Texis, Bricolage)
- Designing and implementation RESTful API

Nov 2001 – Sep 2008: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software Developer / Lead Software Developer. Initially served as part of the team and later as a team lead developer on one of the company's flagship B2C system “Natural Gas accounting system” (Windows Server NT-2000, MSSQL, ASP.NET, C#, CSS, XML/XSLT, HTML, JavaScript, AJAX). Developed “Company claim support subsystem” which was used for claim management. Served in average of 200-250 claims a day with a peak of 2000+ claims. Developed “Social security data exchange subsystem” that was widely used for social security data exchange with more than 25 data providers in 4 different data formats. Served around 6.5 million accounts in total. Developed “Customer accounting subsystem” which was Installed in 20+ “Gazprom” branches and served more than 15 million accounts in total. Developed “Legacy data import subsystem” that was widely used during legacy data import phase of the “Customer accounting” deployment process. During this phase was imported from 10 to 20+ years history of billing, payments and account details information about almost 15 million accounts.
Responsibilities:
- Developed client/server application and web frontend
- Designed and implemented data structures, business logic layer, data access layer
- Migrated customer data from a range of different legacy applications
- As a leader of a small (3-6) people team solved performance issues, organized customer support and release management for some subsystems

Aug 1997 – Nov 2000: XXX State Academy of XXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software developer. Developed software allows analyzing robust stability of self-controlling systems by using model’s interval polynomial zero areas.

Dec 1995 – Aug 1996: XXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed workflows automation software for HR, Sales and Inventory departments.

Feb 1994 – Dec 1995: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed “Customer accounting system” and “Prepaid card management system” software.

EDUCATION
Master in CS, Rostov State University, Russia, Graduated 1997

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Итак версия 2:

MMMM NNNN
XXXX NW XXX TERRACE • Coral Springs, FL • XXXXX • CELL (XXX) XXX-XXXX • E-MAIL xxxxxxxxxxxx@gmail.com

OBJECTIVE
To obtain a challenging and rewarding back-end web developer position where I can utilize my knowledge, proficiency, and skills to contribute to a company's growth and enhance expertise in web development and application design.

SUMMARY
Object Oriented Developer with strong PHP and C# background
Expert in legacy data/application migration between MS and Linux platforms
Over 13 years of WEB development experience
Over 20 years of total development experience
Fluent in Linux, Windows operating environments
Strong back end developer with wide skill set
Strong skills in MSSQL and MySQL database design and implementation

SKILLS
Professional: Web Development / Programming, Database Design and Query Optimization.
Technologies: PHP 5, MySQL, MSSQL, SVN, JavaScript/jQuery, XML/XSD/XSLT, XHTML/HTML 4/5, CSS, Smarty 2/3, Subversion, MVC, Linux, Windows NT-2008. Familiar with many other web technologies (Bootstrap 2/3, Node.js, Json, ASP.NET, MVC2, MVC3, ADO.NET, AJAX, GIS, GOOGLE DATA/MAP API, Microsoft Office API, DB4O etc.)
Applications: MS Visual Studio 6-2012, IIS6-7, Apache2, Mapnik, Texis, Movable Type 4/5/6, Bricolage.

EXPERIENCE
Sep 2008 – Present: XXXXXX, Inc., Fort Lauderdale, FL.
Software Developer. Applied a wide range of technical skills, knowledge and experience to the projects of company’s clients as well as to the in-house intra-network applications. Responsibilities include: web application design, back-end development, using open source toolset (PHP, MySQL, PostgreSQL, Apache2, Linux, Bricolage, SVN, Smarty, Texis, Movable Type and others), front-end development (HTML 4/5, JavaScript/ jQuery, AJAX, Bootstrap, CSS, XML, Google Data/Map API).
Responsibilities:
- Reengineering legacy web applications and migration customer data
- Designing and implementation data structures, data access layer, middleware, back-end subsystems and UI for web applications
- Integration with 3rd party applications(Mapnik, Google data API, Texis, Bricolage)
- Designing and implementation RESTful API

Nov 2001 – Sep 2008: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software Developer / Lead Software Developer. Initially served as part of the team and later as a team lead developer on one of the company's flagship B2C system “Natural Gas accounting system” (Windows Server NT-2000, MSSQL, ASP.NET, C#, CSS, XML/XSLT, HTML, JavaScript, AJAX). Developed “Company claim support subsystem” which was used for claim management. Served in average of 200-250 claims a day with a peak of 2000+ claims. Developed “Social security data exchange subsystem” that was widely used for social security data exchange with more than 25 data providers in 4 different data formats. Served around 6.5 million accounts in total. Developed “Customer accounting subsystem” which was Installed in 20+ “Gazprom” branches and served more than 15 million accounts in total. Developed “Legacy data import subsystem” that was widely used during legacy data import phase of the “Customer accounting” deployment process. During this phase was imported from 10 to 20+ years history of billing, payments and account details information about almost 15 million accounts.
Responsibilities:
- Developed client/server application and web front-end
- Designed and implemented data structures, business logic layer, data access layer
- Migrated customer data from a range of different legacy applications
- As a leader of a small (3-6) people team solved performance issues, organized customer support and release management for some subsystems

Aug 1997 – Nov 2000: XXX State Academy of XXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Software developer. Developed software allows analyzing robust stability of self-controlling systems by using model’s interval polynomial zero areas.

Dec 1995 – Aug 1996: XXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed workflows automation software for HR, Sales and Inventory departments.

Feb 1994 – Dec 1995: XXXXXX, Rostov, Russia.
Junior Software developer. As a part of team developed “Customer accounting system” and “Prepaid card management system” software.

EDUCATION
Master in CS, Rostov State University, Russia, Graduated 1997

OTHER
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у меня такое ощущение, что "чистого web-бэкэнда" нынче мало кому надо.
Даже если вы предпочитаете бэкэнд, пишите более обтекаемо "web developer", больше народу клюнет :)
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на мой взгляд версия 2 вполне годная
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По-моему, главное правило - писать не обязанности, а достижения. В крайнем случее, имейте два пункта на каждую работу -

- Duties: починял примусы
- Accomplishments: починил примусов на миллион рублей, повысил прибыль от починяемости примусов на 5%.
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Fortinbras wrote: - Accomplishments: починил примусов на миллион рублей, повысил прибыль от починяемости примусов на 5%.
Ну и возникает вопрос "Откуда такая инфа у рядового прога?", тем более если он работал в команде.
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У меня вопрос, я сечас учусь в колледже ну как и все пионеры сдаю тесты, на последнем тесте выявил ощибку в программе давала не правельный ответ. Отправил запрос куратору и он потвердил что да программа не правельно оценивает знание, извинился и исправил мой грейд. Могу я вставить в своё резюм этот поинт о том что я такой хороший нашёл ощибку, а до меня толпы народа сдавали этот тест и все как бы потом становились программёрами. То есть повысил эффективность обучаемости программёров :-)
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FreemanUSA wrote:У меня вопрос, я сечас учусь в колледже ну как и все пионеры сдаю тесты, на последнем тесте выявил ощибку в программе давала не правельный ответ. Отправил запрос куратору и он потвердил что да программа не правельно оценивает знание, извинился и исправил мой грейд. Могу я вставить в своё резюм этот поинт о том что я такой хороший нашёл ощибку, а до меня толпы народа сдавали этот тест и все как бы потом становились программёрами. То есть повысил эффективность обучаемости программёров :-)
Я бы себе такое не вписал.
Ценность программиста не в том сколько он багов отловил, а в том сколько он их создал.
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valchkou wrote:...
Ценность программиста не в том сколько он багов отловил, а в том сколько он их создал.
:nono#:
Ценность программиста не в том сколько он багов отловил, а в том сколько он их НЕ создал.

(на всяк.случ. для всяких зануд - это я попытался пошутить)

Кстати вопрос - существует ли верхний предел для кол-ва багов в программе? Типа
-- Вот мой код по вашим спекам. Там могло бы быть 47 багов, но я их не создал. Я крут!
-- Слабак! Вот мой код по тем же спекам, я мог бы вдуть туда 103 бага, но не сделал этого. Я круче!
Как же это вы без гравицаппы пепелац выкатываете из гаража? Это непорядок...
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Как мне кажется, про настояшхее место работы следует писать в ностояшхем времени а не в прошедшем. Йето я про applied a wide range...

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