Покритикуйте резюме (оно же CV)

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Покритикуйте резюме (оно же CV)

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Коллеги, активно рассылаю резюме.
Прошу указать, как правильно, о себе заявить рекрутеру
Личную информацию выделил жирным и скрыл :)

А вот собствено и само CV

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Professional summary
More than 9 years of experience in Logistic, Retail, Finance and CRM modules in Dynamics Ax. Participation in all phases of development in Cost Accounting, Supply Chain Management, Warehouse Management, RPayroll, CRM, POS Retail. Tooking place in migrating from Axapta 3.0 to Dynamics AX 2009. Building all business process on transferring product from material to goods in Dynamics Ax 4.0. Setting up and customize POS Retail in Dynamics AX 2012. I deployed Dynamics CRM 2011 and obtained huge skills of administrating and integration. Mature experience in web development, C#, XSLT/XPath, SQL Server, Web Services, PHP, HTML, CSS, Windows service.
Fine English language skills, experience in phone communications.


Professional experience
Company: SomeCompany 2013 – 2014
Role: Architector.

Duties:
• Developing POS Retail
• Developing reports
• Create training materials


Set up and develop retail store functionality. I created new loyalty process for retail module in AX 2012. Set up and modify whole security model. I developed reports for this functionality. For development I used Dynamics Ax 2012, SQL 2012 R2 database

Company: SomeCompany 2012 – 2013
Role: Architector.

Duties:
• Installing and set up all enterprise components of Ax 2012
• Developing Budget module for state-owned company
• Developing reports for its needs
• Create training materials


Develop for sate – owned company budgeting cycle. I created new business module based on standard budgeting module. Set up and modify whole security model. I developed reports for this functionality. For development I used Dynamics Ax 2012, SQL 2008 R2 database

Company: SomeCompany 2010 – 2012
Role: Development Lead.

Duties:
• Modifying dynamics Ax HRM and personal module
• Migrating from back office programs to Dynamics AX 2009
• Developing Reporting Server (SSRS)
• Integrating with other back office programs using .net

Transfer all personal financial insurance charges and calculating salary to Dynamics Ax modules. I developed calculating agent insurance salary. Transfer methods of calculating from back office programs to Dynamics Ax. In this project I developed reports for this functionality depends on calculating methods. For development I used Dynamics Ax 2009, SQL 2008 database.

Company: SomeCompany 2008 – 2010
Role: Development Lead.

Duties:
• Modifying Axapta Trade & Logistics module to accommodate business tasks of the company
• RPayroll, CRM
• Migrating from Axapta 3.0 to Dynamics AX 2009
• Modifying Axapta Finance module to accommodate the business tasks of the company
• Developing web-pages for corporate web-site
• Developing Reporting Server (SSRS)
• A lot of CRM modification

Implementing Trade & Logistics and Finance modules in Oil Distributed Company. I developed customer settlement with bank payment in Axapta. Developed chain resource intercompany. CRM customization. During the work I developed a lot of reports for this functionality. Getting practice with Reporting server. For change data with 1C I configuration AIF. For development I used Microsoft Axapta 3.0, SQL 2005 database.

Company: SomeCompany 2005 – 2008
Role: Axapta Developer.

Duties:
• Developing reports in Axapta;
• Change Supply Chain Management, Cost Accounting
• Developing enhancements for Axapta Trade & Logistic module;
• Axapta integration with alcohol national registration system;

Working in big retail system, internal project, I developed many logistic modifications of standard functionality of Trade & Logistics module in Axapta. I was involved in the development of Excel reports, based on SQL stored procedures, as well as fixed bugs in the existing version of the system.
Company: SomeCompany 2004 – 2005
Role: Axapta Developer.


Duties:
• Developing budget module;
• Administration of Axapta equipment;
• Integration with 1C national accounting system;
• Integrating Finance project

Administering Axapta installations. During the work I developed reporting system. Was responsible for the development of the new repository. I solved integration problems with other equipment based in the cottage and corporate site.
Older than 2004 I was a 1C (Russian accounting system) developer. Worked with 7.7 and 8.0 versions.

Education

Moscow Electronic and RadioTechnical University
Automations and electro mechanics faculty
Specialization: Computing machines, complexes, systems
Qualification: Engineer

CERTIFICATIONS
Here is list of my certificate
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SomeCompany - в какой стране?
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в рассеи )
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хинт #1 - просмотреть аналогичные топики на привете
хинт #2 - duties - до лампочки, писать надо, что сделал/делаешь: разработал то, выкинул се, соптимизировал пятое, внедрил десятое
хинт #3 - если работа ищется в сша - выкинуть упоминания про fine english skills и прочие 1с.
хинт #4 - отдать на просмотр человеку, владеющему англ. языком
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"Tooking place..." - надо исправлять
"I" не использовать вообше
Каждое предложение начинать с глагола в прошедшем времени, ни каких "Working", "Developing"
All rights reserved, all wrongs revenged.
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Английский очень неважный, надо гораздо лучше, работа подразумевает много контактов с клиентами, очень много, так что надо показать, что язык на отличном уровне, из резюме этого не видно совсем.

More than 9 years of experience in Logistic, Retail, Finance and CRM modules in Dynamics Ax
experience какого рода? Заполняли формочки, или setup, configuration and customization?

Потом, что вы подразумеваете под словом "developed". Все modules, которые вы упоминаете, POS, Budgeting, already developed. Что вы делали, exactly? Set up and configuration? Customization? Если customization, то что конкретно, добавили windows, stored procedures, etc. какие tools использовали? Упомяните названия платформ, X++, MorphX, чего там еще AX developers используют.

Developing Reporting Server (SSRS)
Наверно, deployed SSRS and developed reports.

as well as fixed bugs in the existing version of the system
doesn't sound good with Microsoft, здесь все это работает по-другому, они за bug fixes, вообще за любой schema change могут лишить прав, не упоминайте это, или напишите adapted and customized to suit the company needs.

I solved integration problems with other equipment based in the cottage and corporate site.
?

И т.д.

Вообще, английский, английский, английский. На месте рекрутера я бы побоялась вас представить клиентам, честно сказать.
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не Architector, а Architect.
Solution Architect, Software Architect.

В заголовке желательно указать на какую позиция претендуете.
У вас не понятно кто вы программист или руокводитель?

Eсли архитект-программист то следует написать что то типа:
Hands-on architect with more than 9 years of proven experience in delivering enterprise quality solutions.

Для повышения шансов на H1 я бы все таки составил резюме программиста.
И вместо архитект, дев лид вписал бы, senior dev.
в описании же можно указать что и архитектил и тимлидил и на дуде играл.

а вот пример вакансии, только что прилетело, фразы можно прям оттуда копипастить.
на первых этапах, пока анг не выправится, лучше так и делать.
Job Title Senior Architect

Skills Required and Job Description:

Relevant Experience: (in Yrs) 8-10 Years

Technical/Functional Skills

¿Full lifecycle (SDLC) and application development technologies: SQL databases, LDAP, Java/J2EE, web services, XML, and web technologies: HTML, CSS, JavaScript

¿Unix/Linux and Windows operating systems and related internals; storage; networking and load balancing technologies

¿Engineering/architecture principles (Object Oriented Design, Patterns, Service Oriented Architecture) and advanced application development methodologies (Agile, Scrum, etc).

Experience Required >10 Years

Roles & Responsibilities
¿Design overall system and solution architecture, system integration, and implementation strategy.

¿Lead (planning, control and reporting) all aspects of the SDLC to ensure their effective performance and high quality to agreed budget and timelines including feasibility of the project, provides scoping and estimates, defining a project or problem (functional / non-functional business requirements), architecture and design and all aspects of testing.

¿Lead and mentor the Software Engineering team. Act as the primary technical contact, provide coaching, mentoring and guidance to all members of the Software Engineering team.

¿Recommend the tools / technologies / frameworks to be used for architectural components such as exception handling, error logging, archival, security framework, batch framework, rules engine, workflow

¿Evaluate and recommend the tools to be used for development and deploying the application

¿Work closely with all stakeholders including End-Users, Project Managers, Creative Directors, Software Engineers and Account Executives to ensure successful delivery of projects

¿Participate and Conduct architecture workshops

¿Plan and track the activities for Architecture and Design activities

¿Report and present the status to Leadership, Lead Architects and Technology Officers

¿Coordinate in developing Proof of Concepts

¿Collaborate with consultants, vendors

¿Collaborate with client Technology groups / experts for help and reviews

Generic Managerial Skills
¿Excellent communication and co-ordination skills

¿Ability to multi-task effectively between technical and non-technical personnel.
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Все спасибо, пошел править ))

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